After conducting a peer review exchange with my partner, I plan on making multiple changes to my rationale.  First, I will fix all the incorrect citations, and properly use the MLA format.  I also need to include a Works Cited page that cites all the sources.  Second, I need to edit my introduction and only focus on one specific aspect of illiteracy.  I raised many interesting concepts there which would retract and distract my audience.  Third, I need to focus on making sure the main message of the ad, aka the 32 million adults in the US can’t read, is very prominent and draws the most attention.  Fourth, I need to change the color of the million dollars text since green on green is hard to read.  Fifth, I will explain the fallacies and the effectiveness of the ad in the rationale.

Signing off,

Delectable Danielle