Humans of New York

“My father was a farmer and we had eight siblings. I went to Australia when I was fifteen because my family didn’t have enough to eat. I was on a boat for forty days. When I got there, I couldn’t find a job, I couldn’t speak English, and I had to sleep on the street. I know what it’s like. So everyday I drive the van to the port and hand out bread to the refugees. My son is my business partner. He says, ‘Baba, please. It’s fine to help. But not every day.’ But I still go every day because I know what it feels like to have nothing.” (Kos, Greece)

I chose this particular picture because this man’s story reminds me a lot of my family’s story before they came to the states. My grandmother had 10 children back in Peru and it was a struggle to try and raise them since they definitely did not have the means to live in a safer neighborhood or even put food on the table. My uncle tells stories about how my grandmother had to cook his pet chicken because there was simply no food left to eat. Therefore, when I read that this man would go to the port every day to hand out bread to the refugees because he remembers what it felt like to have nothing, I somehow felt grateful. Grateful that maybe there was someone like him who helped my family when they had nothing.

“Humans of Iran”

MONDAY 28 SEPTEMBER 2015

“My husband and I sold everything we had to afford the journey. We worked 15 hours a day in Turkey until we had enough money to leave. The smuggler put 152 of us on a boat. Once we saw the boat, many of us wanted to go back, but he told us that anyone who turned back would not get a refund. We had no choice. Both the lower compartment and the deck were filled with people. Waves began to come into the boat so the captain told everyone to throw their baggage into the sea. In the ocean we hit a rock, but the captain told us not to worry. Water began to come into the boat, but again he told us not to worry. We were in the lower compartment and it began to fill with water. It was too tight to move. Everyone began to scream. We were the last ones to get out alive. My husband pulled me out of the window. In the ocean, he took off his life jacket and gave it to a woman. We swam for as long as possible. After several hours he told me he that he was too tired to swim and that he was going to float on his back and rest. It was so dark we could not see. The waves were high. I could hear him calling me but he got further and further away. Eventually a boat found me. They never found my husband.” (Kos, Greece)

I selected this story because of the picture. Everyone knows the phrase “Don’t judge a book by its cover” and I have been doing exactly that and I will continue to do that. When I came across this photo, I saw a woman that was obviously in pain and suffering. Due to this, I wanted  to read her story. After reading her story, it just struck me how much suffering and heartache she must have gone through is still going through. After reading her story, I looked at the image once again and I noticed her wedding ring more than ever. Her story is a true tragedy, she lost her home and husband.

Refugee Story

Greece, Refugee Pic

Thursday, October 1st 2015

“In the past four months alone, we’ve had twelve thousand refugees stop here. We know because we’ve counted the sandwiches that we’ve handed out. They show up battered and beaten. We set up this rest area along the road to hand out sandwiches, juice, and water. One night we had one thousand people here. You could see nothing but heads. We’re not professionals, just volunteers. The families break our heart the most. They show up with no money, no papers, and no hotels. Sometimes it’s raining and they have nothing but cardboard over their heads. They have nothing for their children, and we know how hard it is to raise kids even in standard conditions. Our son hasn’t seen very much of us recently. Even when we are together, the phone is always ringing and we are absent in mind. Recently he asked if we could build a big boat and send the refugees somewhere that there is no war.” (Lesvos, Greece)

What had led me to choosing this story was because I personally am attracted to what leads people to helping others who they have never met. To think that a man who many wouldn’t consider to be nice because he’s atheist would help out with his family thousands of others is truly remarkable in it of itself.

Thinking about Revision (classwork – April 6th)

 

Read “Revising Attitudes” by Brock Dethier, and complete the following:

  1. List three ideas about revision that you took away from this piece.
  2. On pages 2-3, Dethier describes eight different forms of “Resistance to Revision.” Which of these best describes your attitude toward the prospect of revising your work? Explain your choice.
  3. Which essay have you decided to revise? Why?
  4. What do you hope to achieve in this revision? (Don’t say “a better grade!”)
  5. What advice do you have for yourself (or your peers) as you begin this process?

Homework for Monday, April 11th

In order to continue our investigation of the current refugee crisis, please complete one of the following tasks BEFORE our class session on Monday:

–Go to the blog  Humans of New York.  The creator of this blog photographed and recorded the stories of refugees he met in Greece and Iran.  Look in the archives for September 26th – October 6th, 2015 and December 3rd – December 15th, 2015.  Choose a photograph and accompanying narrative that you find particularly compelling or interesting, and post it to our blog, together with a short explanation of what led you to make this choice.

–Do a search of articles related to some aspect of the refugee crisis, and choose an article to share with the class.  It could be a newspaper, magazine, or other media news story or editorial piece.  Post the story to our class blog, together with a short explanation of why it captured your interest and why you think it is worth passing on.  Limit your search to publications in the last 12 months.

–Profile someone you know who is (or was) a refugee.  (Think about the definition we used in class.)  Post a photograph of him/her to our class blog, together with a short description of his/her refugee story.   Where is he/she from? Why did he/she find it necessary to leave? What were the circumstances of his/her departure?  How did he/she end up in the U.S.?

Paper Revision: Due. Wednesday, April 20th

As we’ve discussed, you will be revising either  your personal essay or your literary analysis.

Revisions are due as a hard copy in class on Wednesday, April 20th.  No late papers will be accepted.

For this assignment, you will be working with the same text and the same topic as you did in your original paper.  In order to receive credit for this assignment, you will need to engage in substantive revision of your original essay.  This means far more than simply addressing the corrections that I marked on your original essay; it means creating a new paper that meets your goals more successfully than the original did.

Displacement in Pop Culture Assignment

Stephen Fellus,

For this assignment I chose the Movie “Coach Carter”. I believe that this true story is very interesting, and it relates to the theme of someone with a different mindset and philosophy coming into a situation and making it better. Coach Carter comes to richmond high school to coach the varsity basketball team. Richmond  is one of the worst neighborhoods in the country. The basketball team has talent and potential, however they lack conviction and discipline which is exactly what Coach Carter brings. He helps these kids turn their lives around not  only on the court but off of it as well, by teaching them to be athlete’s as well as students. Coach carter turns boys that would have likely just become another statistic into well rounded successful men.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=znyAnWUYf2g

 

 

 

 

Displacement in Popular Culture: Assignment #2 – Due Monday, April 4th in Class

Building on the posts that you did about examples in popular culture that use the Superman/Fresh Prince model and the conversation we had in class about the selections you made, write an analysis of the show/movie/video you’ve selected. Your analysis should be 500 words or more.  This assignment is due in class on Monday, April 4th.  No late submissions will be accepted.   Your analysis will, of course, be in paragraph form, but be sure that you address the following:

–Provide a concise summary of the premise of your show.  Be sure to include its genre

–What is the relationship between the “outsider” and the “host community”?  How do they differ?

–What function does the “outsider” serve in the “host community”?

–What happens as a result of the displacement?

–What underlying meaning can you derive from your text? Is it offering any kind of cultural critique or commentary?

Use these questions to help guide you in creating your own analysis.  Feel free to address issues I haven’t raised here.