ENG 2100: Writing 1 with Jay Thompson

11/15 Jordan Hernandez

  1. Well there is a lot of people that are either very biased but they are mad. These type of people tend to just change things up a little in a way that’ll benefit them. I usually try to block out anything that seems negative for no reason. Things that aren’t my business I like to keep out of, especially if it seems like a bunch of crap. I try not to go into anyones problems because if I do there’s a chance that it could become my problem.
  2. A new writing that I have learned is learning how to elaborate. There are many small things that need detail but we seem to cut them out because we think they arent important but in reality they are. They are useful and help the reader imagine what you are trying to say. I think this very important to add to my writing. Also the fact that papers are starting to get longer so this would help with word count too.
  3. Well people have always said to keep writing nice and short and try to just keep it t0 important big details, but pretty much when it comes to writing every small detail is very important when it comes to helping the reader.
  4. An unpopular opinion I have is that taking the bed is a useless chore. I know that it looks nice but if you want your bed to be clean you can just shake the sheets as that’s what a lot of people do before they make the bed. If youre someone like me you find yourself on your bed a lot when it comes to doing work or just when you’re relaxing. Just laying on your bed could undo it. Also when its cold you would like to go under the Blanket, so what was the point of making the bed.  The only thing I can think of is if guest are coming over and are probably gonna end up going to your room.

2 thoughts on “11/15 Jordan Hernandez”

  1. Jordan, I agree about (2) and I’m glad you’re drawn to more elaboration in our work. Until we elaborate, it can be easy to overlook how much of our thinking is still unexpressed.

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