My first paper was pretty bad, I have always had trouble gathering my ideas and trying to raise an argument. Since I know it is something I have always had trouble I try to work on it and try to get better but seems to me like nothing can really fi this problem at least that is what I though. Last week I meet with professor Kaufman and it was great. I recommend to the people that have not gone to see her. She just asked me one question and I began to write. And by stating that comment “So what”, I got my thesis.
Something that I will work on this paper is read out loud. I never imagine that strategy actually working but it really does. As I was in professors Kaufman office I read out loud, and made of face of all the silly mistakes I had made. As I work on my second paper I will ask my self “so what” through out my paper and read out loud to correct my grammar.
Glad to hear things are going well! EJK