Compare and Contrast

Posted on March 24, 2014 by TANYA TANIS

After work shopping today in class today I was abae to see that my thesis and the main sub subject topics of my paragraphs did not match at all. Also I noticed that some things could be teased out more than what had originally wrote in my paper. Also the theme was not so clear and I need to proofread more on grammatical errors. The idea of my piece was nice but needed better support and one central idea and not many different ones to support it. I was also able to see different writing styles of people to better see what I can benefit from and learn from other students who’s are strong in a specific form or writing than me. I learned through myself that the conclusion of my paper could have a bigger connection and make the reader discover larger ideas. There is great criticism and there is wise criticism.

About TANYA TANIS

Hello everyone my name is Tanya Tanis but most people call me Tiny. I was born and raised in Brooklyn,NY which influenced my creative side a lot. I began to dance and sing when I started middle school and pursued it through out high school. Then i got into more of a party scene amongst teens which influenced me to go into business as well did getting involved with ING investment challenge. Through all my experiences with working with teens and planning i learned that I loved planning and budgeting and investing money for a return profit which is why I wanted to be a business major. There is Money to be made working with young adults who if you really look barely have any real stable night life or places they can gather. I am very observant person and very outgoing but I can be stern as well and stubborn as well, but also very fun and funny.
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