During the progress of my compare and contrast essay, I focused on the lying pattern Twain portrayed in The Adventure of Huckleberry and Finn. Through the workshop in class, couple of my classmates thought it was also a good idea to write about the lies in the story. However, most of them thought my thesis and introduction paragraph are not strong enough to draw readers attention.
My thesis is one of the weaknesses in my paper. The thesis looks very unclear, and should definitely put more time and effort into it. Some of the strength I see in my paper is the examples and quotes I found in the book. I found a few quotes in Huckleberry Finn to support my idea and focus of the essay.
After a few helpful ideas from different perspectives through the workshop, I should put more effort into my thesis. I should narrow down my topic to make a stronger thesis that covers the topic of the essay.
