When it comes to the result of my sentence analysis, I was not surprised by the results. Many of the sentences within the two paragraphs consisted of complex sentences with some complex-compound sentences and a few simple sentences. I was not surprised by that because I was very descriptive and I connected the two texts well which needed me to use complex sentences more than the other types of sentences. I had some complex-compound sentences so that I can connect multiple ideas at once so that I could emphasize certain points that I had made and make it an overall more descriptive paper. I used some simple sentences so that I could make clear points and making it a much clearer paper . It reveals about my writing style that I like to analyze and describe the points that I make in the paper in detail so I tend to use more complex sentences than the other types. The changes that the count of sentence types within my paper will prompt me to include some slightly shorter sentences so that the paper can be slightly more smooth. It can enhance my writing by making the paper slightly more smooth and it would make my points a little more clear and possibly impactful. The sentence style within my paper correlates to my edits and revisions that I plan on making in my draft because it might incline me to use different vocabulary that can make my sentences more descriptive for the paper.
Spring 2022
