I decided to do Strategy 1 “To say something better” and one of my main issues that I have so far in my draft is wrapping it up to deliever the idea or message to the readers. So I would need to relate more to my thesis statement and not overdue my part because there are other ways to explain it further in the essay. This exercise revealed that my topic is more flexible than previously thought and how I should be more direct in my writing to get my point across. I chose this exercise because out of all the strategies it was my best pick to do. The only real issue I am having right now is trying to flow my evidence and sub topics to make the arguement make sense.
Spring 2022
