The strategy I chose for revision is option 1 because I think I can expand and explain further on some parts of the essay. The exercise helped me explore some possible ideas I can still incorporate in one of my body paragraphs. The body paragraph I was working on contained some quotations about how the show Money Heist inspired real life protests. I think I can write more about how the issues people were protesting about are similar to the issues caused by neoliberalism. I can also connect back to the issue of economic inequality and perhaps include ideas about the lack of representation of minorities. The main thing I am struggling with right now is trying to connect the art I’m working out to real life events.
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Tying it into neoliberalism sounds interesting. It’s nice to see people incorporating what they have learned from this class.