The strategy I decided to choose was option 1. Option 1 made it way easier for me to expand on a topic and to give more examples. I was able to further build on my argument and make it sound stronger. I think I chose option 1 because it made it way easier for me to clear my ideas and organize them a bit better. I think the main thing that I struggled with was repetition. Not with just sentences but mainly words. Being able to look at a specific sentence and build on it made it so much easier to add to the paper. I used less repetition.
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I agree that keeping repeating the same thing is a very common occurrence in writing. Expanding on different topics strongly supports the thesis statement in the essay.
I also struggle a lot with repetition and maybe by trying out this exercise I can fix my essay and expand from there. Glad to hear that this exercise worked out well for you and can’t wait to see how your essay turns out later on!