Blog 4

In my situation, sentence analysis assisted me in carefully selecting what I was attempting to express or how I wanted it to sound to my reader. My word choice, in particular, to make my sentences more effective when someone reads my work. When I’m writing, I’ve always thought that I write too much and that it doesn’t always make sense or fit together. When I was doing sentence analysis, I took my time to break down exactly what I was attempting to say and how I should say it to have the greatest impression.Furthermore, when I cite a statement from an article, I frequently just throw the quotation in without explaining it or properly weaving it into the sentence. By correctly evaluating the quote and really inserting it in the appropriate position, I learned to sort of fit everything neatly into the paragraph. Adding more complicated phrases to my writing would help me expand on what I had written in my draft and present my ideas more fluidly on paper. Adding more complicated phrases would also allow me to integrate some of the basic sentences I was using, thus boosting the flow and general clarity of my work. These improvements may enable me to reach a higher level of enhanced writing, which I may apply to my other classes. I also realized that, while my work makes sense to me, I want others to read and comprehend all I wrote. I want my paper’s message to be obvious and to influence readers as they read it or to allow them to reflect on what they’ve just read.