Blog 4

After marking each sentence in two of my paragraphs, the results showed that I’ve incorporated all 4 writing styles, but I used complex and compound sentence structures more so than any other. This is mostly because of my usage of transition words and prepositions to start my sentences. The least used style within my 2 paragraphs was the complex compound style. . The result wasn’t that surprising to me since, for first drafts, I’m aware that I use these structures more so than any other one. Due to this, I create sentences that are a bit wordier than I would like. This forms a tiresome-to-read sentence, which could lose its value in the grand scheme of things. It also leads to many instances of redundancy. To accommodate for these issues, I’ll work on changing and incorporating more simple style structures. This structure will allow the main point of the sentence to be emphasized and shown in a more clear manner. I can also work on cutting down unnecessary words within these complex and compound sentence structures to make them easier to read and flow better. Sentence structure correlates to the other edits and revisions I plan on making by it brings clarity to the main theme of each paragraph and corresponding sentences. Efficient sentence structure usage is important in creating fluid transitions from sentence to sentence. Ideally, this would make grammatical issues easier to spot, the writing process smoother, and the viewing process more enjoyable.