Blog 4

After checking the first and second paragraphs of my draft, I found many sentences with commas, including one simple sentence, three complex sentences, and nine compound sentences. the structure of the sentences is very important and largely determines the reader’s experience. Using overly simple sentences may make the essay look poorly written, but using too many complex sentences can lead to confusion for the reader, so it is best to use both simple and complex sentences in your essay to make it neat and organized and easy to understand. I was a little surprised by the sentences I used, because I used a lot of complex sentences, even though it might make my essay complicated. I usually think of a general framework and start writing, because I don’t really like to delete everything and start over, which is very inefficient. Even though it’s just a draft, I still write it as if it were a formal article. When I go back and check it, if there are no huge mistakes, then I don’t have to spend a lot of time revising for that. Maybe I’ll choose to add some simple sentences so that my subsequent articles will allow the reader to better understand what I’m saying. I think revising sentence patterns is an exercise for my own writing, which can enhance my writing skills. But I will most likely keep my own style, which is something different for everyone. I also think I need to shorten some of these sentences to make them more impactful.