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Cheap to Chic

The J train casts a shadow and covers the discount stores, apartment buildings and pedestrians walking down Broadway. In between of graffiti covered walls and empty lots turned into jungles stands a 5 month old Hotel & Hostel, sprouting the question: What is this doing here?

The B Hotel & Hostel uses South Williamsburg easy access to the city as a way to attract potential guests. It made its grand opening in July. The B Hotel & Hostel, is one of many new trendy businesses in Williamsburg that attract a demographic outside of its residents. “Tourists come from overseas,” said receptionist, “because we are next to the city.” Guests staying at The B, rent the bed that they sleep in since rooms are shared with other guests. Is the trendy north crossing  over to the simple south ?

Trendy businesses is not the only thing coming from the north. Although the south side of Williamsburg didn’t gentrify at the same rate as the north, slowly but surely changes are occurring. In the year 2002 and 2003 new condominiums started developing in South Williamsburg.

New housing being developed on the waterfront of South Williamsburg.

New housing being developed on the waterfront of South Williamsburg.

Although it is agreed that the condos are beautiful, longtime residents are worried of the effect they will have to affordable housing. “I honestly think that the new condominiums could be a good idea for the economy,” said long time Williamsburg

resident Iris Rodriguez, “but on the other hand it could be a great threat for the low income families since they are not able to buy one and in the future low income housing may disappear.” Residents fear that in the future many old buildings in South Williamsburg will be transformed into new and expensive housing.

“Some building was there and it was taken down to build a new, more expensive place which lower class can’t afford,” said Jorge Ovalle, a 29 year old Williamsburg resident since he was ten. “One thing I noticed is that there was this big church, don’t know why it was sold, but it was torn down and they built condos on that same location.”

The Domino Sugar refinery opened in the 1880’s and closed down in 2004. Now plans are being made by Two Trees Management to turn this factory  into over 2000 apartments. This same company helped transform DUMBO, to its current state of offices and expensive apartments.This project is

estimated to cost $1.5 billion.The purpose of these new apartments is to generate money while the profits of the office space that will also be developed are low. The idea of making offices and apartments is so residents can live and work in the neighborhood. Although the city has granted permission for this construction, the public still has its reservations.

“What small businesses will be able to afford the rents once the luxury towers get filled,” asks an online commenter on Curbed’s article Two Trees’ SHoP-Designed Domino Development, REVEALED! “Tenants will want big box stores, not the goods and services of locals.”

Will these new apartments, with a waterfront as a backyard, be as affordable as the buildings the longtime residents of South Williamsburg are used to? Two Trees will recieve the support of neighborhood representative, Councilman Stephen Levin, if they provide affordable housing.

According to MNS Real Estate, the average rent in North Williamsburg is $3499 and in South Williamsburg $1900. Making the south part of Williamsburg $1600 cheaper to live on average. As the south gets more apartment buildings that resemble the ones up north the $1600 rent difference is sure to decrease.

New luxury building that will be available in the beginning of next year/

New luxury building that will be available in the beginning of next year/

Like the B Hotel & Hostel, other new developments are taking advantage of South Williamsburg’s easy access to public transportation. The Garnett is a new luxury building on South 4th that will be available on January 1, 2014. The price of a studio apartment with one bath is $1,975 a month.  The price of a  one bedroom apartment will start at $2,350, making this housing development above the average rent price in South Williamsburg.

According to the Quarterly Survey of Brooklyn Residential Sales from the Douglas Elliman report, the average sales price increased by 23%. This report also shows that the rent is rising in not only Williamsburg but in neighborhoods all around Brooklyn. Reports show that cheaper rent can be found in some parts of Manhattan.

If affordable housing is eliminated from South Williamsburg, low income residents will have to move to another neighborhood that they can afford to live in.

 

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Conflict of Reconciling 2 Worlds

The writer of this article begins the story with a little background information on Mr. Shata. The writer then explains how Mr. Shata made his way to leading a mosque in New York post 9/11. The conflict of this story is Mr. Shata having to find a way for the members of his mosque to keep the traditions of Islam in a modernized Western society.

The writer of this article provides quotes from sources from both sides of the conflict. Mr. Shata, an Egyptian law professor at the University of California, Mr. Moussa ( Mr. Shata’s predecessor) , a Muslim activist, a retired officer, a wife seeking a divorce and a Palestinian immigrant.

This is not a news story because it is not an article about an event that recently occurred. This is a feature story because it tells the story of an imam and his struggles to merge opposite worlds and find a common ground. The writer ends the story with “Time and again, Mr. Shata’s new country has called for creativity and patience, for a careful negotiation between tradition and modernity.” With this sentence, the writer reminds the reader of the purpose of the article. This is a conflict that Mr. Shata has faced and will continue to face as the members of his mosque modernize and are influenced by Western culture.

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The Deadly Choices at Memorial

Sheri Fink starts off her story with a very descriptive anecdotal lede that draws the reader into the story. Her writing style gives the reader the feeling that they are reading a novel instead of an article for a publication.

The eighth paragraph I important because it makes the reader take a moment and think about whether what Pou did was wrong or right. It gives an insight as to the reason why these deadly choices were made.

Although Fink shows the reasoning behind the choice to “help patients through their pain”, I feel that she is biased and portrays that what the nurses and doctors did was wrong. She ended the article with the following quote,  “Do you just flip a switch and you’re not a hospital anymore?” I feel that with ending with this quote Fink was sending the ,message that even though a patient is close to death, the job of a doctor is to save lives.

 

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Andry Gift Shop

Customers order products not available in the store from the AVON catalogs.

Customers order products not available in the store from the AVON catalogs.

Just when you think the day is over, an elderly    woman  walks in two minutes before closing time and decides to ask about the all products available,” said Shantel Ramirez a former Andry Gift Shop employee.

 

Andry Gift Shop is a variety store In East Williamsburg. The business is owned by a Dominican married couple, Osvaldo and Ventura Rosa. Opened ten years ago in Bushwick, a nearby neighborhood in Brooklyn, it didn’t last long there because it was too small. Currently, Andry Gift Shop is located on a busy commercial strip on Graham Avenue. “The area is good but it is not like before,” Osvaldo said, “more people used to come to this area.”

Joselyn helps customer decide what face cream to purchase.

Joselyn helps customer decide what face cream to purchase.

Ventura started off as a AVON representative and her clients would order products from the catalogs with the products sold, changing during every Avon campaign. By opening an AVON store, Ms. and Mr. Osvaldo gave their customers the opportunity to shop for their AVON products and eliminate the waiting process that came with making orders.

Most customers in the store are Hispanics, not surprisingly because Graham Avenue is known as the Avenue of Puerto Rico. Customers also include non-Hispanic local residents.
Osvaldo manages the products that are delivered to the store and Ventura works in the store selling, alongside her current employee, Joselyn Sanchez, one of six million AVON representatives. The store is open for business from 10:00 am until 7:30 pm, Monday through Saturday. The store is closed on Sundays, due to their responsibilities as pastors of a Pentecostal church in Williamsburg, El Camino Crucificado.

The products sold in the store are mostly for women; the products that men come to buy are deodorants and colognes. 90 % of the merchandise sold in the store consists of AVON products;

the remaining 10%Classic name brand perfumes available for customers.

Classic name brand perfumes available for customers.

consists of name brand variety products.

Andry Gift Shop sells many perfumes including Calvin Klein, Red Door, White Diamond and Perry Ellis. “People come for the classics,” said Shantel.

The most expensive products in the store are girdles, which range from $45-$125. The most popular and cheapest products sold are deodorants which sell for six for $5.00 “People buy them by the boxes,” Shantel said. An average of 20 cases of deodorants are sold, each case holds 160 deodorants.

The shelves of deodorants are constantly refilled throughout the day.

The shelves of deodorants are constantly refilled throughout the day.

Ventura also sells gift baskets that she designs. Customers buy the basket when they don’t know what to buy a family member or friend, for their birthday or holidays like Mother’s Day. Gift baskets start at $13 and go up to $30. “The baskets make good gifts because it puts all the essential together, “ said customer Thereza Leon, ”lip gloss, lotion, body spray, nail polish–it’s all there.”

On average, the store brings in a range of $500-$700 in revenue on week days. During the weekend and national holidays, revenue can go up to $1,500.
The gift shop was not easy to start up but it has turned into a business that both Osvaldo and Ventura are proud of. When thinking of the future, they both agreed that they are, “Just going to keep on working.”

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Apology For Breathing

Leibling describes New York City as a complicated place that has my things going on at once. He talks about different types of New Yorkers, just like we read in “Here Is New York”. Leibling however put them in two categories instead of three. The first type of New Yorker that Leibling talks about is a person so involve in one environment that they completely forget about the many others. The second type of New Yorker is the person who is aware of NY’s natural history but thinks little of them.

Leibling describes how New York has its own language.Leibling says that New York is a real city because even though it is an old place, New York City doesn’t stay in the past. New York City keeps on renewing itself.

The way New York is described in “Apology For Breathing” is fairly the same as it is today. One noticeable difference would have to be is the people. Leibling writes, “Native New Yorkers ae the best mannered people in America…New Yorkers are modest.” Well mannered and modest is not how New Yorkers are usually described.

The way Leibing describes New Yorkers was not objective. If he had lived in another city, would he still write the same thing?

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Joe Gould’s Secret commentary

I don’t think that Joseph Mitchell’s writing style is outdated or old fashioned. He has a very descriptive writing style that allows the reader to create an image of how Gould looked and how he went about his life. Considering the unusual life of Joe Gould and the story telling style of Mitchell, it feels like one is reading a fictional story. His two pieces on Joe Gould are definitely feature articles. These two profiles on Gould, are good examples that aspiring feature writers can go by.

The second piece on Gould introduces him in a more negative light. Mitchell used sentences like “Gould looked like a bum and lived like a bum.” “He was generally pretty dirty.” “His voice was distractingly nasal. On occasion, he stole.”I feel that Mitchell chose to portray Gould as a bum and not as a literary genius the second time around because he wanted to make it believable when readers found out that his Oral History was a lie.

Reading the first profile, I was skeptical about the Oral History. What made it hard for me to believe was its supposed length. “It is already eleven times as long as the Bible.” This statement threw me off, because I am currently in the process of reading the whole Bible. It has been a couple of months and I am still not done. The Bible is a very long book and just to imagine a book eleven times its size seems unreal.

 

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