Introduction & Conclusion

Introduction:

 

Hello Baruch Administrators, Alumni, and faculty. Thank you for taking time out of your day to listen to the vision we have for Baruch College. Over the past few months, many concerns have risen throughout the Baruch community. Some include the elevators in the Lawrence and Eris building, the lack of outdoors space for activities, and transportation to and from the dorm buildings. We have come up with a few ideas that will hopefully put an end to the students concerns. With these changes, Baruch will improve tremendously as well as improve the college experience students will have.

 

Conclusion:

 

We hope that the issues presented and the solutions created sparked your wanting for renovation, change and addition. With your help, we will be able to bring these suggestions and ideas to life- creating both a better school and environment for the students. We know it may be hard to install all the ideas now, but we will remain hopeful that it will be done in the future. By going forth with these ideas, students will benefit tremendously. Thank you so much for your time and we hope you have a great evening.

Conclusion Post

Baruch has been at the forefront of a revolution. Down the road it will probably do it again. It isn’t obvious why Baruch has become so popular over the years. Ever since the Baruch community moved from its original campus to the Newman Vertical Campus in 2001, there has been a boom in student loyalty. Baruch College’s retention rate for first year students was a whopping ninety two percent. Even after moving to the Vertical Campus, the honorable administration deemed it wise to renovate the former Campus now dubbed the Lawrence & Eris Building. The same should be done for the next revolutionary project-renovating Baruch College, one more time.  The Baruch faculty and executive board must eventually find it wise to plan ahead of time and seize the moment while it lasts. Baruch College may be entering another age and willing to grow into more. The revelation is inevitable. It is time to fix these elevators, make the dorms feel closer to home and truly make Baruch home-everybody’s home. If we did it once-we can do it again and we will do it again and we must, do it again.

Intro Post

The Lawrence and Eris Building is in terrible shape. Students are having a hard time adjusting to Baruch life. The surrounding buildings, classrooms and chairs are slowly rotting away. Student morale is at an all time low. As a commuter school, it’s easy to say that that’s the reason why there is a eerie dissatisfaction towards Baruch life. What’s wrong with stating that the reason for such discontent towards Baruch is due to the fact that it is a commuter school is because that it isn’t the only factor that plays in this problem. There are complaints about the elevators, dorms, student life and the whole campus in general, almost all the time. It’s time to improve Baruch before it’s too late. If not, Baruch will continue to slowly decline in student participation as well as renovation opportunities in the years to come. Believe it or not, Baruch is in need of change. The Baruch community has suffered enough. Once things are better, the impact of such trans-formative renovations will not only be beneficial for the whole college but also put CUNY Bernard M. Baruch College as the new favorite in NYC for all future students and generations to enjoy and cherish forever.

 

Introduction to the Speech

Introduction

 Hello Baruch Administrators, Alumni, Faculty, and fellow Students. It has come to my attention that Bernard M. Baruch College is in need of change. Change in the commute of the students who live in the dorm. Change in the daily commute the students take to get to their classes. Change in the environment in which the students can learn, study, and even relax. These changes will not only improve the lives of the entire student body and but it can even improve your lives as well.