Imagine being a Baruch student again, walking outside of your dormitory and getting on a free shuttle that drops you off right in front of your school. You walk along One Bernard Way and enjoy the green space the school has created. After taking our your ID card and walking through the revolving doors, you see no lines for the elevators and you decide to take it to your next class. Improving Baruch College goes hand in hand with improving students’ lives. Ever since the Baruch community moved from its original campus to the Newman Vertical Campus in 2001, there has been a boom in student loyalty. As one of the best CUNY schools Baruch College’s retention rate for first year students was ninety two percent and still has the potential to rise. We leave here in hope that everyone considers these suggestions we have made today and make Baruch home-everybody’s home.
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Introduction and Conclusion
Intro:
Esteemed faculty, students, and administrators, it has come to our attention that there are changes Baruch should make. We would like to propose several ideas that would ensure for a better school, and a better learning environment. We understand that 90 million dollars are already being given to better Baruch, but we have some additional requests. We hope you take these into consideration, as it is in the best interest for everyone. We would like a shuttle bus service to be implemented from the dorms to the school. This would connect the two buildings. Also, we would like to have a more green campus. Planting trees would help achieve this, or starting a roof-top garden. Lastly, we already are aware that money is being given for elevator repair, but we would like if this could be done as efficiently as possible to not interrupt the flow of traffic and make it any worse than it already is. These changes would make Baruch a better school than it already is.
Conclusion:
Imagine walking outside of your dormitory and getting on a free shuttle that drops you off right in front of your school. After taking our your ID card and walking through the revolving doors, you see no lines for the elevators and you decide to take it all the way to the top, since you have time before your next class. You get off at the top floor, the “green-roof.” You find a nice bench underneath a tree, and you sit down to review your notes before class. This is something that seems almost impossible, but can easily be achieved. We would like this to be an ordinary day at Baruch college, but we need your help in order to make that possible.
Introduction and Conclusion
Introduction
Dear Baruch faculty, administrators, and alumni,
Thank you for taking your time to listen to our concerns for the school. Before immediately discussing them, I would like you to close your eyes and imagine a perfect college. It has a beautiful scenery with freshly cut grass and evergreen trees on campus, where students can easily take a five minute walk to from their dorms. There aren’t any problems going from class to class. It has the best faculty, dedicated to students’ needs and learning. The students are in an environment that removes stress and allows them to completely focus on their studies. This perfect college or a college close to the ideal college is not impossible to achieve if we put all of our efforts to do so by adding greenery on campus(planting trees and placing flower pots in classes), improving dorms (either changing the location or providing shuttle buses), and improving traffic flow(fixing elevators and delegating traffic) that would ultimately help students’ academic performance.
Conclusion
If we can fix these issues in our college, there is little doubt that people will not enjoy being on the campus more and most likely improve academically since they have fewer things to worry. Students can focus on their school work and not go through the hassle of huge crowds and walking up many flights of stairs with changes in the vertical movement. Students can also get to class quicker if dorms were much closer or there were shuttle buses available. In addition, students can improve their mental state with more greenery on campus. Improving the campus in such ways will benefit everyone. Let’s not allow anyone to say you all are anything like congress. Thank you again for your time!
Introduction & Conclusion
Introduction:
Hello Baruch Administrators, Alumni, and faculty. Thank you for taking time out of your day to listen to the vision we have for Baruch College. Over the past few months, many concerns have risen throughout the Baruch community. Some include the elevators in the Lawrence and Eris building, the lack of outdoors space for activities, and transportation to and from the dorm buildings. We have come up with a few ideas that will hopefully put an end to the students concerns. With these changes, Baruch will improve tremendously as well as improve the college experience students will have.
Conclusion:
We hope that the issues presented and the solutions created sparked your wanting for renovation, change and addition. With your help, we will be able to bring these suggestions and ideas to life- creating both a better school and environment for the students. We know it may be hard to install all the ideas now, but we will remain hopeful that it will be done in the future. By going forth with these ideas, students will benefit tremendously. Thank you so much for your time and we hope you have a great evening.
Intoduction and Conclusion
Introduction:
Hello everyone, I’m glad that you’re all here. Always progressing, innovating and striving towards improvement is the hallmark of business, and it is fitting that Baruch, one of the top undergraduate schools in the nation for business should do so as well. You have all worked hard on improving the Baruch experience, and half the battle is identifying what the issues that students really care about are. We are here today, as students, to let you know what we believe should be your next focus. Fixing the elevators in the Lawrence and Eris building is critical, as this issue inconveniences thousands of students every day. Adding greenery is also important, as many studies have shown that doing so has many positive benefits. Lastly, we believe that making the commute for dormers easier is important, as it will let them experience a more quintessential dorming experience. We have also come up with a variety of ways in which these issues can be addressed.
Conclusion:
I hope you will keep our speech in mind as you consider how to make yours, and our, school better. These are important issues, and we have all thought long and hard about the solutions we shared with you today. We know that we may not have accounted for everything, and that some things we ask may not actually be feasible or possible; all we ask is that you try to fix these issues in anyway you can, even if our specific methods are insufficient. Most of the benefits of the things we suggest right now would not be immediate, and would take several years to implement. We understand this, but don’t mind, because we want the same thing as you; a better experience for future Baruch students. Thank you for listening to us, and we hope you enjoy your evening.
Introduction and Conclusion Post
Introduction:
Hello Baruch administrators, faculty, and alumni. As a nationally ranked college, Baruch College has taken pride in having one of the most diverse student bodies in the nation and provides students with countless opportunities. However, even at such a prestigious institution, there are some issues that need to be addressed. At this moment, I would like to ask some questions. What could change if there were more greenery on the campus of Baruch College? What could change if transportation was made easier between the dorms and the college? What could change if the elevators were more functional? The answer is obvious. Students’ lives at Baruch can be drastically improved. These little changes can lead to much bigger benefits that not only improve students’ lives, but also Baruch College as a whole.
Conclusion:
After what has been said, we hope for your support in changing Baruch College for the better. Keep in mind; we are by no means trying to find flaws in the college. We simply would like our concerns to be heard. Baruch College has been constantly improving itself and has succeeded in evolving into one of the best business schools in the nation. By taking these extra steps in improving students’ lives, Baruch College can prosper even more. After all, improving students’ lives go hand in hand in improving Baruch College as a whole. Thank you for your time today and have a good evening.
Conclusion Post
Baruch has been at the forefront of a revolution. Down the road it will probably do it again. It isn’t obvious why Baruch has become so popular over the years. Ever since the Baruch community moved from its original campus to the Newman Vertical Campus in 2001, there has been a boom in student loyalty. Baruch College’s retention rate for first year students was a whopping ninety two percent. Even after moving to the Vertical Campus, the honorable administration deemed it wise to renovate the former Campus now dubbed the Lawrence & Eris Building. The same should be done for the next revolutionary project-renovating Baruch College, one more time. The Baruch faculty and executive board must eventually find it wise to plan ahead of time and seize the moment while it lasts. Baruch College may be entering another age and willing to grow into more. The revelation is inevitable. It is time to fix these elevators, make the dorms feel closer to home and truly make Baruch home-everybody’s home. If we did it once-we can do it again and we will do it again and we must, do it again.
Introduction and Conclusion to Speech
Introduction:
Good evening ladies and gentlemen, I hope you all are having a good time. It’s an honor to have you all here sharing your time with us. It feels good to be back at Baruch right? Not too long ago you were in our positions, sitting in the same seats we are sitting in, learning from some of the very same professors and taking the same elevators we take today, or did they not work back then either? You then had to walk up 12 flights of stairs feeling as though you were climbing up the “stairway to Heaven.” Any Led Zeppelin fans out here? Well I’m here today to talk to you about just that and Baruch as a whole. We all have had some great memories at Baruch and it holds a special place in our hearts, otherwise we wouldn’t be here today. Those memorable conversations in front the building and those times we had to run to class because we overslept. Let’s face it, we all still care for Baruch and we want to help Baruch reach its full potential, but in order to help Baruch we have to address some of the issues that have come up over these past few years. Issues about the elevators, the dorms, and the lack of greenery. Issues that we can solve is we simply took the time to look at them.
Conclusion:
We, as a community, have come so far. We started off as a small school in 1919 and now we have one of the best business programs in the nation. Our schools have become more competitive and we have one the most diverse student body in all of the US. That is something to be proud of and that is something we should keep in mind. Each and every one of our successive efforts have helped build this school into what it is today. And look at how far we’ve come! What started off as a tiny reforms from our community, like our Ticker newspaper, have made their way into the heart of our school and changed the very school itself. We are asking the same from you today. We are asking you for that very opportunity to help Baruch flourish for many years to come. We want a close-knit community by bringing the dorms closer. We want an efficient and safe environment by renovating the elevators. And we want our community to be healthier and happier by planting trees around campus. We don’t ask for much. All we’re asking for is a chance; a chance to make Baruch what you’ve made it for us: a path to success and a second home. We thank you for stopping by this evening to we hope you enjoy the event.