Intro:
Esteemed faculty, students, and administrators, it has come to our attention that there are changes Baruch should make. We would like to propose several ideas that would ensure for a better school, and a better learning environment. We understand that 90 million dollars are already being given to better Baruch, but we have some additional requests. We hope you take these into consideration, as it is in the best interest for everyone. We would like a shuttle bus service to be implemented from the dorms to the school. This would connect the two buildings. Also, we would like to have a more green campus. Planting trees would help achieve this, or starting a roof-top garden. Lastly, we already are aware that money is being given for elevator repair, but we would like if this could be done as efficiently as possible to not interrupt the flow of traffic and make it any worse than it already is. These changes would make Baruch a better school than it already is.
Conclusion:
Imagine walking outside of your dormitory and getting on a free shuttle that drops you off right in front of your school. After taking our your ID card and walking through the revolving doors, you see no lines for the elevators and you decide to take it all the way to the top, since you have time before your next class. You get off at the top floor, the “green-roof.” You find a nice bench underneath a tree, and you sit down to review your notes before class. This is something that seems almost impossible, but can easily be achieved. We would like this to be an ordinary day at Baruch college, but we need your help in order to make that possible.