Reviewing my essay for the sentence analysis review I noticed a few things. For example I tend to notice that my transitional words were now effective and was lacking in transitioning sentence. I also noticed I had a few run on sentence and instead had a sentence that was now effective due to the length. Furthermore, I need to work on over use words in sentences to the point where the reader forgets what the sentence is saying and eventually loses interest. I need to keep improving on my simple powerful sentences.
Spring 2022
