The revision strategy that I used for my draft is ‘To Say Something Better.’ This revision strategy revealed to me that there are so many areas in my writing that I can not only elaborate on, but also make it a whole paragraph. The main reason for why I chose this revision strategy is because when rereading my draft, I knew that I could write so much more and elaborate but I wasn’t sure which areas I could fit in more writing. The main thing I am struggling with now but am working on is being able to connect all my paragraphs into a conclusion without just giving a summary of what I wrote.
Spring 2022
