Did your verbal summary match what is written in your paper? Is it stronger/ weaker? What did the experiment reveal to you about what else you need to do to revise your draft?
I completed this verbal exercise with the help of my cousin. One thing I realized is how much more formed and captivating my writing was when I spoke it. Without looking at my draft, I was better able to convey what I’m trying to argue in my essay. I need to do a complete haul of my draft today and tomorrow. the main issue I still have is that there isn’t enough of ”me” in the essay, I need to go off-script but also follow a concrete guideline when talking about my main points.