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A Colorful, Deep Portrait of A Muslim Leader in Brooklyn

Ms. Elliott develops her story through the journey of one man bridging the laws of two different worlds. Though there are many ways in which this story could have been complex, she made Mr. Shata’s journey seem like more of a journey of decision-making.

What I think helped Ms. Elliott develop the conflict in this story was creating the right mix of tension from a variety of sources and anecdotes that add color to a multi-cultural picture. She was keen on detail from the very beginning of the story adding the Mexicans in Bay Ridge, comments from an Egyptian law professor, statistics on the city’s mosques, delineating the McDonald’s conundrum, mentioning the trouble of oral sex, and later pressing into the deeper conflicts of domestic violence and marriage.

The thread that held this conflict story together was the multi-faceted portrait of Mr. Shata as an imam, guidance counselor, lawyer, teacher, and coach all rolled into one and tasked with the challenge of spreading Islam in a Western world. In a post 9/11 context this story gives meaningful insight into the routine and happenings of an inclusive Islamic community.

In a reporter interview with Ms. Elliot on the NYT site, she noted how difficult it was at first to get the mosque to “open its doors” to a photographer and to her questions. Though eventually she made her case, highlighting that in order to get a deeper, truthful portrayal of the community, it is important to study and learn from the imam himself.

Ultimately, I think this conflict story was a product of sharp insight into the most fundamental elements of an Islamic community in the Western world. And the imam is a brilliant element of  this community because from this story one can draw the conclusion, that he is the one who holds the community together.

 

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Assignments for Tuesday, November 26th

Please upload a post on our reading, “A Muslim Leader in Brooklyn, Reconciling 2 World.”

1. How does the writer develop this conflict story? Do we get sources on both sides? What writing strategies are used to make this a feature story –and not a news story?

Also for Tuesday, November 26th:

Discussion of possible ledes and nut grafs for your conflict stories.

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November 19th Conflict Story Proposals Due

Dear Feature Writers:

Be prepared to make a presentation on your CONFLICT STORY.

What is the conflict? Who are the parties on all sides? Who are you planning to interview? What background research is relevant? Try to come in with notes, names, contact information, relevant background articles, etc.

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Parkchester Food Pantry Fights to Continue Service

Black shopping bags lay on the table in the middle of Saint Paul’s Lutheran Church’s auditorium. Evelyn McCatty and her staff of three volunteers prep the last of the bags to place on the table before they open the doors.  Outside the church, people started to form a line around seven am. They wait until the doors open at eight with the hope of leaving with one of the bags filled with food. This is one stop of many in the quest to feed their families.

Saint Paul’s Lutheran Church is located at 1891 McGraw Ave in Parkchester in the Bronx. The church’s food pantry began serving families in need in the mid-1970s. “Originally we were able to serve people based on their family size, but now because of our limited budget we only give out one bag of food which is really not enough for a family,” said McCatty. Funding for the pantry began to decline about three years ago. As a result, the number of families seeking service decreased as well.

McCatty began volunteering in the Food Pantry in 1986 when the funding was in its glory. At that time, the pantry underwent a restructuring that made it into the organization it is today. Since then, she has focused on taking the necessary steps to maintain service to the community. One of those steps included changing the way they assist those in need.

In order to insure continuous service, Saint Paul’s is a member of the Food Bank of America and is supervised by the United Way that assists them with managing their state money. Organizations like the Food Bank of America and United Way typically distribute the donations it receives to the food pantries. These alliances are necessary for the pantry’s survival because it is not an independent entity, but a part of the church.

“We can’t get to many private foundations directly because we are under the church’s 501C3. The pantry does not have an independent 501C3,” said McCatty. “Private corporations usually will not fund church pantries, but they do fund directly through the Food Bank or United Way.”

“If a person is here for the first time we service them. If the people have been here before we tell them to come every other month in order to give other families a chance to be serviced,” said McCatty. The volunteers log in the names and of address of each person given food in order to keep track. The staff began to do this because in the past they ran out of food within two to three weeks of a single month. This would cause them to close for one-two weeks out of the month because they only receive food deliveries once a month.

The volume of food received in a single delivery depends on their working budget. The church is a member of Thriving for Lutherans an organization that helps Lutheran churches secure funding. Through this association, McCatty obtains the budget from government grants such as, state grants received through the Department of Health and a city grant through the Department of Human Services; Food Group. Private donations make up a small portion of funding with Ridgewood Savings Bank being their major donator.

The food pantry uses the combination of public and private funding to stay in the best shape possible for the people they help. Saint Paul’s doses not exclude anyone and the pantry is open to all who come. “We don’t just provide for people in zip code 10462. We get a lot of people from zip code 10473 and, occasionally, we get people that do not reside in the borough,” said McCatty. According to the Social Explorer, zip code 10462, that includes the Parkchester neighborhood, has a median salary of $50,000. Zip code 10473, which is in community board 9 along with 10462, has a median salary of $40,000. A look at the housing set up supports this data because there are eight public housing projects for low income families in zip code 10473.

The number of total families coming to the pantry dropped because the resources available declined. Saint Paul’s now finds it is helping more singles than families. “You see there are more than one pantry around. So people go from pantry to pantry,” said McCatty. People are resorting to this tactic because much of the federal funding has gotten cut.

The cutback on the amount of federal funding caused a major dilemma for food pantries. “State grants three years ago totaled $18,000. Last year it got cut down to $8, 000,” said McCatty. She currently does not know what the future will bring for the pantry. The only hope she has in continuing to work and make the right decisions at the right time. She alluded to the fight her clients face and why they must go from pantry to pantry in order to eat. “We are currently operating on a budget of about $25,000. You can’t buy much food with $25, 000,” said McCatty.

Evelyn McCatty, Director of Saint Paul's Food Pantry

Evelyn McCatty, Director of Saint Paul’s Lutheran Church’s Food Pantry

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The Deadly Choices at Memorial

Sheri Fink starts off her story with a very descriptive anecdotal lede that draws the reader into the story. Her writing style gives the reader the feeling that they are reading a novel instead of an article for a publication.

The eighth paragraph I important because it makes the reader take a moment and think about whether what Pou did was wrong or right. It gives an insight as to the reason why these deadly choices were made.

Although Fink shows the reasoning behind the choice to “help patients through their pain”, I feel that she is biased and portrays that what the nurses and doctors did was wrong. She ended the article with the following quote,  “Do you just flip a switch and you’re not a hospital anymore?” I feel that with ending with this quote Fink was sending the ,message that even though a patient is close to death, the job of a doctor is to save lives.

 

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A Powerful Yet Tragic Story ‘The Deadly Choices at Memorial’

Sheri Fink does take the side of an investigative journalist in her story chronicling the decision made by Anna Pou and other doctors at Memorial Medical Center in New Orleans to categorize intensive care patients as those with “terminal and irreversible conditions” who are not worth saving in times of disasters.

By reflecting how “stunned” morgue workers were at the number of dead bodies they received from the hospital and by mentioning her role as a journalist, interviewing Ms. Pou at length though she declined to comment on any patient deaths, Fink proves her credibility as a reporter and writer.

Fink implies that the eventual death of intensive care patients was wrong, but maintains her status as an objective journalist by including that although the Life Care staff members asked on Tuesday for their 52 patients be added to the transport plans, Tenet Healthcare, the hospital’s main healthcare provider, said that Life Care staff members turned down several opportunities to receive evacuation assistance the same day.

What is important to Fink’s storytelling technique is her ability to create Anna Pou as a character in a novel. She does not go into the personal details of Anna, simply that she has a tiny build, is passionate, and likes to wear pearls. But yet despite her calm demeanor, she was able to make such an important decision that cost numerous lives. “The full details of what Pou did, and why, may never be known,” Fink wrote. This statement lends itself to a more insightful portrayal of Ms. Pou as an individual.

Fink organizes her story from the most current news of Ms. Pou trying to save herself from three suits through advocacy of her decision, to the lack of public awareness of her idea on what doctors should due in the sake of “disaster preparedness,” then to leading up to the days handled by tiers of medical workers left with the aftermath of a bad decision, and finally to the inevitable deaths of so many intensive care patients, and the angry relatives they left behind in confusion.

 

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Gish Jen Profile

A small Chinese woman took the stage on the sixth floor of the Baruch College library building after several faculty members introduced themselves and the college’s Harman Writer-In-Residence Program. The woman had thick shoulder-length black hair and a face so alive, so animated, without a spot of makeup.

Author Gish Jen was so enlivened and so charmingly awake for her conversation at the Harman Writer-In-Residence semi-annual event this Tuesday night. Once a semester, the designated Harman Writer-In-Resident is featured at a conversational event, the public is invited, and the writer can choose to speak about their work, their life, and then answer questions from the audience. Gish Jen chose to feature a slideshow during a talk about her latest novel (and first non-fiction novel) called Tiger Writing about the rich and winding history of her family in China.

As I have not had her as a professor but had read excerpts of her writing both fiction and non-fiction, I wasn’t sure what kind of speaker she was going to be. She absolutely blew me away. To a student’s question she was asked about the Chinese culture and what it had been like when she visited, Jen replied with gumption, including, “We don’t need anymore misinformation in this world, honestly.”

A theme that seemed to develop in some of her replies during the Q and A portion of the evening was that of a literature-less childhood. It was the story of a poor Chinese immigrant family who couldn’t afford books for the children. Of her childhood, Jen said, “I grew up in New York! I knew more Yiddish than I did Chinese!”

We learned that Jen dropped out of Stanford’s business school and pursued creative writing at the prestigious Iowa Writing Workshop at the University of Iowa.

Jen’s demeanor was proud, but not too proud, laughing so humbly and warmly that it felt as if we were all out to dinner with her, and we were all her guests. Dressed in a dark velvet blouse that draped over her arms, Jen’s graceful motions and course of speaking were without flaw. She reminded me of a woman wading through water and silk with her hands, the rest of us in the room simply gasping for air around her figure.

Gish Jen spoke about her writing process, which she essentially described as haphazard and without order. She described a beautiful ideal situation for her writing to flourish: in a cabin in Vermont, alone, not to leave for hours at a time, or until her writing for the day is done.

As people began trickling out during the Q and A session, Jen remained patient and answered thoughtfully to the queries asked. To each question, she began her reply with, “Very good question,” with such sincerity that nobody seemed to notice the repetition.

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