Reading through my Comparative Analysis Essay, I was unable to come across too many issues with my sentence structure. I was unable to find any sentences or grammatical errors in the sentence analysis worksheet that matched up with any sentences in my essay. In my own personal opinion, I still feel as if my writing style must improve and there are more things I need to learn about writing. I want to grasp the concept of writing to the point that it becomes almost second nature to me. However, it does reveal to me that I am at a level I am intended to be at, although it is not one that I am satisfied with. In the future, I hope to be able to improve my diction and my paragraph structure. As for the changes, I only plan to make the changes to my essay as suggested by peer review and the professor. These changes will change my essay to appeal more to readers and my audience. Unfortunately, I will not be able to address this topic in further detail because I lack sufficient evidence to establish substantial grounds to believe that my writing may be as flawed as required to reach the word count.
Spring 2022
