I enlisted the cooperation of my friends for this experiment, asking them to do their best to stay unbiased and neutral. My vocal summary helped me realize that I was on the correct track so far in trying to meet the paper’s question. When I read my document aloud, I spotted language errors and when things don’t make sense. I could also notice any continuous sentences and be able to avoid them in my paper. My friends believes I might reinforce my thesis by including additional examples of music or other forms of media. That was something I intended to accomplish.
Spring 2022
