Benjamin Gillespie, Department of Communication
Tags: AI for communications, AI-enhanced pitches, voice and authenticity, ethical use of GenAI, professional communication, critical digital literacy
Prof. Gillespie’s Description
In designing this assignment, I wanted to give students a concrete, real-world communication task—the elevator pitch—and use it to explore both the practical and rhetorical dimensions of working with generative AI. We often talk about “audience” and “voice” in Communication Studies, but AI tools like ChatGPT present a new opportunity and a new challenge: How can students use these tools to refine their messages without losing the sense of who they are?
This assignment asks students to draft a pitch on their own first—to root the work in their lived experiences, tone, and phrasing—and then use AI to revise it with attention to clarity, tone, and impact. We take a two-step revision approach, incorporating both machine and peer feedback, to highlight that writing and revision are dialogic processes. Students also reflect meta-critically on how AI influenced their message—what it improved, where it missed the mark, and how their voice changed or stayed intact.
My goal was to make AI feel less like a shortcut and more like a rhetorical tool—one that invites critique, collaboration, and experimentation. The assignment is scaffolded to show that AI can support communication work, but that students must direct and shape it actively. They finish with a revised written pitch, a class presentation, and a reflection that doubles as a critical conversation about authorship, professionalism, and emerging technologies. The framework is adaptable for other disciplines—public speaking, marketing, management, or even creative writing—and could work wherever students are developing a professional identity and refining how they present themselves to others.
Course Information
COM 2020
From the course syllabus:
Course Description:
This course focuses on communication skills expected of college graduates entering into business fields. Students who successfully complete this course will be able to produce clear, concise, evidence-based, argumentatively sound, and persuasive professional communication of various types. The course will emphasize the importance of being purpose-oriented and audience-aware. Examples of work to be done include writing e-mails, drafting business memos, creating executive summaries, producing strategic reports, and crafting other types of internal and external business communication. In addition, the course will teach students how to develop good listening skills and also how to develop proficiency in various interpersonal speech situations. The course will inculcate the habit of revising and editing the work one produces, while providing all students with copious opportunities for feedback from their instructor and their peers.
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“Drafting and Revising Your Elevator Pitch Using AI”

Benjamin Gillespie (PhD) is Doctoral Lecturer in the Department of Communication Studies at Baruch College, CUNY, where he teaches courses in business and professional communication, public speaking, theatre and performance, and gender studies. In addition to his teaching, Benjamin is a theatre scholar with research interests in LGBTQ+ performance in North America.