Conclusion First Draft

Imagine being a Baruch student again, walking outside of your dormitory and getting on a free shuttle that drops you off right in front of your school. You walk along One Bernard Way and enjoy the green space the school has created. After taking our your ID card and walking through the revolving doors, you see no lines for the elevators and you decide to take it to your next class. Improving Baruch College goes hand in hand with improving students’ lives. Ever since the Baruch community moved from its original campus to the Newman Vertical Campus in 2001, there has been a boom in student loyalty. As one of the best CUNY schools Baruch College’s retention rate for first year students was ninety two percent and still has the potential to rise. We leave here in hope that everyone considers these suggestions we have made today and make Baruch home-everybody’s home.