Blog Homework #3 – Successful/Unsuccessful Designs by Bryan Contreras

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Above are three logos (Kate’s Florist, Melon Tech, and Tree Doctor) in which I feel are bad design examples. The logo for Kate’s Florist looks like three images (which were not properly edited) pasted onto and oval shape with the company name on it. The second, Melon Tech, looks more like a daycare’s logo than an IT company. The image and colors do not go with what one might associate with an IT company. Lastly, the Tree Doctor logo has too many images in it. Each one is competing for attention. In addition, the letter “r” in tree is somewhat hidden because of the tree behind it.

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To illustrate good design, I chose an illustrated design of a deer’s skeleton, another company logo, Gale Vehicle Management, and a human skeleton design. The deer illustration is well designed. The skeleton does not look like a lifeless thing. There is still form and movement to it. As if it is still walking through the forest. In addition, the typography created/chosen to identify what type of skeleton it goes really well with the illustration because it somewhat follows the lines of the skeleton in a way. Or maybe it is because it looks straight and solid and is what we would associate how bones feel and look.

 

The logo for Gale Vehicle Management works because the way the image for the car was designed. It is very streamlined and gives the illusion of a fast car driving against gale force winds. The way the gradients on the words Gale Vehicle along with the image also gives the illusion of movement and form.

The human skeleton design is a great example of how to use text to create an image. The word for each part of the body is used to create the skeleton. Different sizes of the font is used to help the design as well. Lastly, the design also has movement, the same as the others.

Types of Successful and Unsuccessful Designs by Ivy Zhao

 

 

surfrider_ad_sushi_cropThis is a very successful design because first of all, the designer’s message was to prevent people from littering and polluting the ocean with garbage. So in order to make it effective, he or she chose to use sushi, a snack that contains seafood from the ocean, disguising it with a paper bag for the rice and filling. So by using blue, bold text, the viewer can immediately realize that this is a warning to prevent people from throwing trash into the waters as whatever you eat may have came from there. It does seem to give a psychological effect on the viewer.

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This is another successful design that I really like. First of all, there is little text which can sometimes be beneficial to the viewer since we want to read things that are fast and brief. Here is a image of a bottle of Tabasco hot sauce which you can already tell is really hot from the smoke coming out from behind. Using negative space was a very smart idea since the bottle is a bold color so using white will bring the image closer. For the text, the designer used the contrast of bold letters as well as size.

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This is an obvious design that is brief and concise. It’s  a McDonlads ad that uses big high def images of satiating hamburgers to lure the viewer into buying McDonalds products.

Unsucessful Designs

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This is a poor design since it is really hard to read with the type being too flashy. I also don’t see how the background helps convey the message of the text whatever the message is.

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I really don’t understand what’s going on in this design. How does rock climbing have anything to do with the word Shakeout? I like the negative space but no clear message.

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This was one design that gave me a headache. There was way too much text, too much going on for one design. I don’t even want to read it since the spacing of words were cluttered all over the place. SOmetimes its best to make things simple with a few words and an image.

Punchcutting

Punchcutting is an unique method of designing. It requires a lot of hard manual labor while meticulously following each step. Each step requires a lot of patience and precision because if it is not done correctly, then the whole project would be ruined. Although punch cutting is a traditional method of typesetting, it is a form of art that will be admired.

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Blog Homework 3 by Shaina Kamkar

When it comes to the “right” design, I think the answer isn’t always the same. Personally, when I think of a form of good design, it’s usually something that has word play or has a strong relationship between concept/content and design.

For example, in these three designs, the exact words and their semantics directly reflect the design. My favorite would have to be the third design: “I Never Finish Anyth-.” It is clever not exactly in the choice of type, spacing, etc, but rather in the actual meaning of the statement. For all I know, the designer could have written “I love cats and-,” which would still get the message across.

tumblr_m4cclaGPL21qjh7zko1_500 tumblr_mhtzcmeYGW1qjh7zko1_500 tumblr_mvrhf3lRNz1qzh0vno1_500On the other hand, my idea of not so good design other than Dr. Zizmor’s subway ads, would have to be something that confuses the meaning of the design. This could be done many different ways such as using images that have no relevance to the meaning or even using such an illegible type that nothing is understood.

For example, this piece, unlike the ones above, overlaps its lettering, which makes it difficult to read and understand the meaning. DECONSTRUCTION 5

 

 

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Above are advertisements that have been unsuccessful. all three of these advertisements have not shown me their meaning. An advertisement is sup[pose to say something to it viewers without words and none of these do this.

The first image I was very confused why the lady had a white paste all over her hair and it wasn’t until I looked at the tiny font that I noticed that it was suppose to look like glue. In my opinion it looked like a bird had pooped on her head and that had nothing to do with this advertisement.

For the next two pictures they both have still left me to be confused. What are they trying to tell me? what is their purpose? These are not questions that people should be thinking about when they see and advertisement. In my opinion when people view a picture or an ad they should be left with an idea or purpose of it.

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These last three images are successful ads in my eyes. their colors work with one another, I can see a concept and I enjoy viewing them. I believe that anyone that sees these ads can tell what they are for and understand where the creator was trying to go with it.

In the first image I felt that it was very creative for the designer to do that with the fork. It show the viewer that it is for a place that has to do with rock and roll as well are food. Being an advertisement for The Hard Rock Cafe it really showed the audience what their brand it about and that is what an advertisement is suppose to do.

As for the Tide image I thought that it was funny, cleaver, eye catching, interesting, and very creative. I love this advertisement because it shows the audience that is about cleaning those messy stains and that it is not a problem for them. It is genius!

My final ad is about the winter collection of Essie nail polish. I think that this works because the white background helps the colors to pop and shows views what nice colors they have. It is simple and colorful and gets their point across which is why this is a image that actually works.

Punchcutting

I take my hat off to the people that have had the patients to sit and create the letters that we use today. I do not feel that I would ever be able to sit and punch out the letters, I like that I can preview the fonts that I would like to use and in a matter of second I can just delete it and then try out a new type. I think That if I had to use this method it would take me a very long time and I don’t know if I would really like it. My favorite thing about my projects is that I can experiment with different types. this method would take away time from that and my designs would not be what they are like.

Blog Homework 3

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Hello Everybody,

In my opinion, determining whether a design works or not is based on the meaning behind the design.  If I were evaluating a design, I wouldn’t look and see whether it were too complex or too simple, I would look at what the design was made for.  I would also look to see if the design matches its meaning.

A design I didn’t like was the 2012 London Olympics design.

I feel that this represents London in no way what so ever.  The Olympics are world-wide and every year, the culture of the host city is represented in the logo.  To me, I see no elements of London, or their culture in this.  It is a clever design, but it doesn’t work for me.

Dr. Zizmor Subway Design.

This design is the subway poster of the infamous Dr. Zizmor, a dermatologist.  There is nothing in the poster that represents a good design except for the fact that it is so poorly designed that people remember it because they are overwhelmed by this terrible poster.  The colors don’t match well with the text, the alignment just isn’t good.

Choking Poster.

This poster for what to do when someone is choking is famous but I personally don’t like the design.  The colors to me don’t mix well with the text because it becomes hard to read the black text when the color changes from yellow to purple as the background.

A design that works for me is the 2008 Major League Baseball All-Star Game logo.

What I think works with this Vector Logo is every single element and detail in this design.  The facade that goes around Yankee Stadium (the location of the All-Star Game) is something that is known about Yankee Stadium.  The Yankees Organization is very famous for wearing pinstripes alone.  The Yankees stand for class so the typeface in the design is simple, and classy.  The colors are representative of the New York Yankees, and I believe this design works.

The Obama Hope Campaign poster.

First and foremost, I choose no political side.

The simplicity in the poster is what makes it work for me.  The contrasting colors that represent the United States in the Red White and Blue work perfectly for me.  The word of “HOPE” at the bottom is all that his campaign is about.  It is bold to really show that it is a strong message.  Then President Obama himself on the poster looking into the distant as if he has hope makes the poster work.

ING Marathon (NYC)

I am a person of clean designs and this one is one that I like.  The white background contrasts well with the navy blue and orange text.  The Sponsor with their logo, Location, and slogan are all presented clearly on this design.

 

Typesetting/Punchcutting

I think this method would hinder the amount of creativity that could be put into a design. Whilst, it is truly fascinating and cool how he puts so much time into each letter, I can imagine that after doing all of that work, I’m not sure I would still want to, or be able to make a design with type similar to that which we make in class. I would love to learn how to do all punchcutting, but it really does make me appreciate modern design programs by putting into perspective the amount of time it used to take to set type. It must have been so incredibly frustrating to get something wrong after you had worked so long to make it perfect. Watching these videos gave me a lot of respect for the people who had to do this.

Successful/Unsuccessful Design

How do you decide what is a successful design and what is a not so successful design? Collect three design samples that you consider successful, and three samples you consider unsuccessful. Six samples altogether.

Post them on the blog in “Blog Homework 3”, and explain why you think each is either successful or not successful.

Make sure your name is included in the post

You can also comment on other students’ posts.

Punchcutting

The man who show how to punchcutting seems to have patience because finishing a production requires lots of time. Unlike today’s graphic design with computer, we can print a one page article within a few seconds. According to my observation, the man uses plastic film to trace the word “R” which is similar to the tracing paper I used for the first assignment. Also, the man try to perfect the edge little by little. I think this is the attitude toward our designing process.