Dear, My Peer Review Group

I would like to thank you guys for helping me accomplish thie writing assignment. Without all your help, I dont believe I would have been able to complete the task that was assigned to us. Being in this group helped me learn how to properly do rhetorical analysis. I also learned how to give my peers the feedback they need to write a college-level essay. From the feedback I received from Proffesor Graves, I would summarize the theme as cohesive. He taught me how to make my essay connect with each unit and flow very smoothly. As I continue writing, I want to improve on my sentence structures and word choices. At times I feel like my writing is very broad and doesn’t go straight to the point. I want to be able to make the reader understand what I am trying to convey as quick as possible. Also, my vocabulary and grammer needs to improve as I feel like I still write at a high-school-level. From the topic I chose for this essay, I learned how important it is to use the trope friendship in Japanese animation. It allows for the story and characters develop in a very interesting way and also teach viewers many life lessons. My final plan for this paper is to use all the feedback given to me by my group and Proffesor Graves and incorporate it into my writing. If I needed to countinue adding more ideas into my paper I would use more sources and examples that support the claim I am making. From this writing process I learned how to properly tie in my ideas together and make it easy to understand. My academic intentions moving forward is to improve my writing as much as possible. I wish all my peers and my group all the best as we all continue our days in Baruch College.

Sincerly,

Rafi Mazid