Dear Peer Review Group,
I would like to thank you guys for reading over my work and giving helpful suggestions as to how to make my essays better. I have learned that I am not thorough enough with my analyzation and have to add more information about what I am writing about when revising. Professor Graves was very big on analyzation when it came to my writing and told me to go into more depth when talking about my topic. I would like to work on my time management and my ability to find the right words to put in my writing. I have learned exactly how PTSD affects veterans and what can be done medically to help diminish the effects. I plan to finish writing my ideas down and make sure that my transitions are smooth. I would go more into detail about how it is the brain causes the different effects of PTSD. I have learned that I sometimes leave out important information that is necessary to make the paper understandable. I plan to work on my time management when it comes to writing my papers and also work on getting all of my ideas down on paper. I hope that you guys can strive in your next english classes and reach all of your writing related goals.
I think you did a great job going back to your unit 2 writing and you added specific details into the moment. I really liked how you started your presentation with the moment.
i thought your writting and presintation was well done. I thought there was as geat deal of continutity between your 3 writings. Your welcome for any imput that you found useful. good luck in your next english class and beyond.
I think you did a great job on your work, but striving to self-improve is always good. Throughout the semester, I found it becoming easier to understand your topic. I really liked the introduction of your paper, where you started off with strong imagery. Best of luck in your future classes!