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Doctors (MDs) Offer Practical Advice to Deal with the Extreme Temperatures

January 12, 2014

Washington, D.C.  – Recently we have experienced extreme high temperatures that affected a large part of the United States. Although temperatures have risen in the past few days, we are just getting started with winter and need to be prepared for the next wave of inclement weather.

In fact, doctors say that freezing temperatures can harm people’s health. “It’s best to limit outdoor activity, since prolonged exposure to the cold can lead to frostbite or hypothermia,” said Dr. John Marshall, Chair of Emergency Medicine at Maimonides Medical Center in Brooklyn. “Both conditions can be serious, and even deadly if left untreated.”

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Doctors Offer Simple Advice on How to Deal with Extreme Low Temperatures

      Recently, we have experienced record-breaking cold weather that has hit several parts of the United States and even though temperatures have increased in the last couple of days, winter is recently starting and we need to be prepared for the next cold front that may hit us.

In fact, doctors say that freezing temperatures can pose health risks. “It’s best to limit outdoor activities since exposure, for long periods of time, can lead to frostbites and hypothermia” said Dr. John Marshal, head of the ER department of Maimonides Medical center in New York. “Both conditions can be serious and even life-threatening if not treated.”

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Doctors (MDs) offer practical advise to deal with the extreme temperatures

January 12, 2014

 

Washington, D.C. – Recently we experience extreme cold – record high -temperatures that affected a large part of the United States, even though the temperatures have risen in the past few days, we are just getting started with winter and need to be prepared for the next wave of inclement weather

 

In fact, doctors (MDs) say that freezing temperatures can cause harm to people’s health. “Is better to limit your outdoor activities since exposure for long periods of time can cause froze bite and hypothermia”, Said Dr. John Marshall president of the ER at Maimonides Medical Center in New York. “Both conditions can be serious, and even potentially lethal if not treated”.

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Doctors Offer Tips on Dealing with the Cold

 January 12, 2014

Washington, D.C. — We’ve recently been experiencing record-breaking cold  across much of the United States. Though temperatures have risen in the past few days, winter is just beginning and we need to prepare for the frigid weather ahead.

In fact, doctors say that icy temperatures can present a health risk. “It’s best to limit outdoor activity, since prolonged exposure to the cold can lead to frostbite or hypothermia,” said Dr. John Marshall, Chair of Emergency Medicine at Maimonides Medical Center in Brooklyn. “Both conditions can be serious or even life-threatening if left untreated.”